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File: newlogonewewnewnenwne_newest.png-(55 KB, 540x550)
How would I improve this?
hexafl 08/05/14(Tue)23:51 UTC+1 No.169230 Report

How would I improve this?
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Anonymous 08/05/14(Tue)23:58 UTC+1 No.169232 Report

>>169230
That fucking text.
Jesus christ man
Use tracking/kerning
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hexafl 08/05/14(Tue)23:59 UTC+1 No.169233 Report

>>169232
I don't care about the text, just the logo.
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)00:04 UTC+1 No.169234 Report

>>169233
Its ok but scale it down a bit. Shorten the gap in the middle
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hexafl 08/06/14(Wed)00:05 UTC+1 No.169235 Report
File: newnewnewnenwenwenwewenwnenwenwne.jpg-(109x125)
>>169234Better?
>>169234
Better?
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)00:13 UTC+1 No.169238 Report

>>169235
datfilename
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)01:22 UTC+1 No.169241 Report

Make that thing at the bottom more round i guess.
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)01:43 UTC+1 No.169245 Report

>>169235
I meant from top to bottom
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)02:48 UTC+1 No.169251 Report

>>169235
the white space between the blue should all be the same size, it's distracting
the use of space is weird, better if it fit into a circle
the bottom curve has a kink in it
the text isn't centered under the logo, either center it relative to the whole logo or center it relative to the bottom part, at least
probably best if the logo and text are the same width
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)14:22 UTC+1 No.169307 Report

Just redo it. The wave is a great idea, but like they said, that kink is going to jump out at people. And it is just a weird looking wave with the inconsistencies in the white.You want all the waves to curl into the C shape
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hexafl 08/06/14(Wed)18:06 UTC+1 No.169327 Report
File: byteflood_newest_logo.jpg-(125x71)
>>169307Better?
>>169307
Better?
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)19:09 UTC+1 No.169340 Report

>>169327
Please say that is a draft.
It's so untidy.
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Anonymous 08/06/14(Wed)21:24 UTC+1 No.169358 Report

>>169327
Google "wave logo" and you'll see this and your original idea reproduced a hundred times. Start over with a more original concept.
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)01:56 UTC+1 No.169746 Report
File: okthenillbetakingmyloliandleaving.jpg-(125x73)
OP, you need to be like the...
OP, you need to be like the hip, cool kids.
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)02:01 UTC+1 No.169747 Report

>>169230
Keep the wave shape but make it out of the matrix code symbols
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)02:10 UTC+1 No.169750 Report

>>169747
Or simple ones and zeros
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)02:12 UTC+1 No.169751 Report

>>169750
>>169747
u r gay, that's so literal and overblown. The name is too faggy; that's the problem
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)02:15 UTC+1 No.169754 Report

>>169751
Waaaaaaa
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hexafl 08/09/14(Sat)17:36 UTC+1 No.169886 Report
File: logos.jpg-(125x83)
hexafl
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Anonymous 08/09/14(Sat)21:51 UTC+1 No.169939 Report

>>169746
that could work and i would definitely go there.
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Anonymous 08/10/14(Sun)00:00 UTC+1 No.169957 Report

>>169886
BEAUTIFUL
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Anonymous 08/10/14(Sun)01:34 UTC+1 No.169964 Report

>>169957
you gotta be kidding
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hexafl 08/14/14(Thu)21:07 UTC+1 No.170772 Report
File: logos_new.jpg-(125x83)
How about this?At big sizes,...
How about this?
At big sizes, it looks like there's a puddle of water shaped as "B"(that's why there's that subtle shadow). At small sizes, it still doesn't lose its meaning.
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hexafl 08/14/14(Thu)21:12 UTC+1 No.170774 Report
File: logos_transparent.jpg-(125x83)
>>170772Here's a...
>>170772
Here's a transparent version.
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)21:23 UTC+1 No.170775 Report

>>170774
That's awful. I really hope you were sarcastic.
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)21:31 UTC+1 No.170776 Report
File: _.jpg-(125x102)
looks like it's lacking...
looks like it's lacking something, too much empty space. and ditch that orange font jesus
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)21:33 UTC+1 No.170777 Report
File: _.jpg-(125x102)
>>170776also
>>170776
also
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)22:21 UTC+1 No.170784 Report

>>170777
>>170776
>>169327
>>169235
>>169230
Why can you not space things evenly and make smooth curves? It seems intentional, because it would take more effort to get this weird, uneven result than it would just to turn on "snap to grid" and lay down five overlapping curves.
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)22:29 UTC+1 No.170786 Report
File: curves.jpg-(125x125)
Here. The time between this...
Here. The time between this post: >>170784
and this current post is how long this took to make.

turn on grid
make some black circles
make some white circles
layer them on top of each other
move thing around until it looks like what you want
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)22:39 UTC+1 No.170789 Report

>>170786
Don't forget to use the golden ratio when you do this OP
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hexafl 08/14/14(Thu)22:51 UTC+1 No.170792 Report
File: 5b1.jpg-(125x125)
>>170775I just...
>>170775
I just can't into design anon, thanks for making me even more hopeless.

>>170786
I must be retarded, because I can't do that as perfect as you can.

;_;

Should I just give up and have no logo at all?
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Odin 08/14/14(Thu)23:16 UTC+1 No.170804 Report
File: byteflood.jpg-(88x125)
Maybe like this?
Maybe like this?
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Odin 08/14/14(Thu)23:19 UTC+1 No.170810 Report
File: byteflood.jpg-(125x107)
here you have .jpg
here you have .jpg
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hexafl 08/14/14(Thu)23:20 UTC+1 No.170811 Report
File: Bittorrent-Logo1.jpg-(125x53)
>>170804>>170810Nice,...
>>170804
>>170810
Nice, but would I get in trouble(pic related)?
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Odin 08/14/14(Thu)23:23 UTC+1 No.170812 Report
File: byteflood.jpg-(125x107)
>>170811Dont think so,...
>>170811

Dont think so, not very alike are they?

Here is the final pic, the lines werent in order above each other.
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Anonymous 08/14/14(Thu)23:30 UTC+1 No.170815 Report
File: Gilbert Arizona logo - Town of Gilbert TOG-Logo-HighRes (3).jpg-(125x87)
>>170786that reminds me...
>>170786
that reminds me of the logo for my hometown
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hexafl 08/14/14(Thu)23:46 UTC+1 No.170821 Report
File: g4006.jpg-(23x16)
>>170812There's one...
>>170812
There's one problem though: it's not a square.
I tried removing 2 of the waves, but it looks too bland.
Compressing it sideways doesn't work either.
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Odin 08/14/14(Thu)23:58 UTC+1 No.170827 Report

>>170821
Must the logo itself be contained in a square or the logo + the name?
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hexafl 08/15/14(Fri)00:00 UTC+1 No.170828 Report

>>170827
The logo only.

Sorry if I'm bugging you Odin :v)
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)00:03 UTC+1 No.170830 Report
File: wgpwoshk.jpg-(125x123)
There you go
There you go
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hexafl 08/15/14(Fri)00:05 UTC+1 No.170831 Report

>>170830
Doesn't go well with small resolutions/10
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Odin 08/15/14(Fri)00:05 UTC+1 No.170832 Report

>>170828

chill bro working on it :)
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Odin 08/15/14(Fri)00:29 UTC+1 No.170841 Report
File: byteflood2.jpg-(79x125)
>>170828here is 3 more...
>>170828

here is 3 more square logos, its a shame to miss out on the 3D effect in the last one though
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Odin 08/15/14(Fri)00:39 UTC+1 No.170843 Report

>>170828
gtg man good luck! :)
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)00:45 UTC+1 No.170845 Report
File: yz4zc01m.jpg-(125x25)
>>170831Well, mess with...
>>170831
Well, mess with it, change it
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hexafl 08/15/14(Fri)00:46 UTC+1 No.170846 Report
File: logos.jpg-(125x83)
>>170832It looks...
>>170832
It looks amazing, but unintelligible at low resolutions.

Pic related. I set the background to blue to increase the contrast and made the curves thicker. Still bad at low res.

I'll try the third one in a second.
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)01:16 UTC+1 No.170849 Report
File: 8zssho9y.jpg-(125x33)
>>170845More options
>>170845
More options
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)04:55 UTC+1 No.170879 Report
File: Untitled-2.jpg-(125x125)
Sure why not.
Sure why not.
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)10:02 UTC+1 No.170900 Report

>>170879
I love you, anon, that looks really good.

Which font did you use?
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Odin 08/15/14(Fri)11:33 UTC+1 No.170911 Report
File: byteflood2.jpg-(88x125)
Maybe its enough to put a...
Maybe its enough to put a square box around the logo so you dont have to compress it. here have the pdf
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hexafl 08/15/14(Fri)19:50 UTC+1 No.170965 Report

>>170911
I love that one, but >>170879 is simply better(especially at small sizes).

I think it uses Bree though, a commercial font and I can't find a free font with a B like that(small holes, or whatever they are called).
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)20:38 UTC+1 No.170975 Report

>>170965
http://www.1001fonts.com/archivo-black-font.html
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Anonymous 08/15/14(Fri)21:26 UTC+1 No.170980 Report

>>170900
>>170965
The typeface is Uni Sans Heavy Caps, and it's free. Hope this design helps.
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hexafl 08/15/14(Fri)21:47 UTC+1 No.170987 Report

>>170980
Thanks a lot anon, I love you.
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Anonymous 08/16/14(Sat)03:29 UTC+1 No.171020 Report
File: wave_pixel_map.jpg-(125x125)
>>169230zoom in (pic...
>>169230
zoom in (pic related)
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:19 UTC+1 No.171830 Report

>>169230
Couldn't post a few days ago, i hope you're still around because i would like your permission to use this logo.

If possible i also request you color the black within yellow.
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hexafl 08/21/14(Thu)00:31 UTC+1 No.171832 Report

>>171830
You can have that, because I switched to a new logo.
Here's the SVG, so you can toy around with the colors yourself.
http://a.pomf.se/raetvb.svg
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:34 UTC+1 No.171833 Report

>>171832
Thank you anon, fate led me to this logo, its everything i wanted.

I must ask, what does it mean to you?
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hexafl 08/21/14(Thu)00:36 UTC+1 No.171835 Report

>>171833
It looks like water draining. It's not mine though, a random anon made it.
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:38 UTC+1 No.171836 Report

Ah.. Well if anon is lurking around and sees this only to find his logo in Scandinavia in some time, contact me and we'll settle or it will be replaced.

Thank you for your time!
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hexafl 08/21/14(Thu)00:42 UTC+1 No.171837 Report

>>171836
np ;)
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:53 UTC+1 No.171842 Report
File: why would you want to do this.jpg-(125x83)
>>171830
>>171830
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:55 UTC+1 No.171843 Report
File: pig disgusting.jpg-(123x125)
>>171842>>171830
>>171842
>>171830
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Anonymous 08/21/14(Thu)00:59 UTC+1 No.171845 Report
File: 32433333.jpg-(125x124)
sweden yes
sweden yes
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Anonymous 08/26/14(Tue)17:40 UTC+1 No.172749 Report
File: curves.jpg-(125x115)
>>170786
>>170786
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Anonymous 08/26/14(Tue)23:53 UTC+1 No.172794 Report

Fill the waves with binary but in a lighter shade of the blue and have it gradient. Not many people would know what a byte is
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