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Anonymous 07/31/14(Thu)05:22 UTC+1 No.168127 Report

wanted to try and design a simple website as a mini project to get better with webdesign and after checking out some tuts and pics this is what I've done so far. what do ya think /gd/ and what could I do to make it better
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Anonymous 07/31/14(Thu)05:28 UTC+1 No.168128 Report

>>168127
charge enterprise more, they're a pain in the ass to deal with.
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Anonymous 07/31/14(Thu)05:30 UTC+1 No.168130 Report

>>168128
I know what ya mean man but this is kinda just a mock up prices were just some that I came up with quickly but I'll be sure to change them to something more realistic later, thanks
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Anonymous 07/31/14(Thu)06:01 UTC+1 No.168138 Report

>>168127
-the nav text font is really off, and there's no spacing inbetween them just looks bunched together.
-that header drop shadow just looks bad, if you're going for the simple layout, stick with it.
-great simple apple product, i'd be proud if you actually made them
-i don't really understand what the circles under the products would change, different svgs of products?
-after the initial green block there's no really noticeable background changes this can be good/bad i guess since you're going for the simple layout
-the arrows on the product boxes just seem fuckin out of place to the side like that, put them in the middle and make them bigger
-honestly everything in this could use a ton more padding and the font just looks squished to me
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Anonymous 07/31/14(Thu)23:19 UTC+1 No.168294 Report

>>168127
Everything looks like it's squished, that's probably why it looks weird. Those Apple products look pretty good though, I would probably change them all to have the same screen color.
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