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Constructive Criticism Please Anonymous 07/25/14(Fri)05:36 UTC+1 No.2371032 Report

First time shooping in this way. Any feedback?

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Camera-Specific Properties:
Equipment MakeCanon
Camera ModelCanon EOS 70D
Camera SoftwareAdobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
Maximum Lens Aperturef/4.0
Focal Length (35mm Equiv)315 mm
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Image Height3648
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Vertical Resolution889 dpi
Image Created2014:07:24 21:33:08
Exposure Time1/320 sec
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ISO Speed Rating100
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Exposure Bias0 EV
Subject Distance2.40 m
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Anonymous 07/25/14(Fri)06:02 UTC+1 No.2371038 Report

Anonymous 07/25/14(Fri)06:04 UTC+1 No.2371040 Report

Get rid of the figure and just use the birds. The man is distracting and breaks the illusion that your seeing something about the spirit of this girl rather then just two layers in photoshop
Anonymous 07/25/14(Fri)06:07 UTC+1 No.2371044 Report

wad0 07/26/14(Sat)23:46 UTC+1 No.2372382 Report

image is slightly interesting, but that thing on her lip is a little distracting, is it a ring or part of a wing?
Anonymous 07/28/14(Mon)03:34 UTC+1 No.2373305 Report

Anonymous 07/28/14(Mon)03:40 UTC+1 No.2373310 Report

more like a face full of shrapnel

Anonymous 07/28/14(Mon)03:46 UTC+1 No.2373314 Report


I don't think you've done a terrible job and it looks like you have tried to save some of the depth by your placement and angle of the birds but it just hasn't quite worked out. There are already very few shadows on her face to show depth and what are there are light. The birds even when re-angled and resized aren't quite adding depth but further removing what little there is. I think better choice in your image selection could solve this.
Anonymous 07/28/14(Mon)05:30 UTC+1 No.2373369 Report

are those fake birds? If not where are the clouds?
Anonymous 07/28/14(Mon)05:52 UTC+1 No.2373384 Report

> Please post images that are JPG format, smaller than 1 MB, and/or about 1000 pixels on the longest side.
didn't read teh sticky. that said, would bang/10. remove the jewelry.
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