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Langeland - DK biff 07/06/14(Sun)12:42 UTC+1 No.2356923 Report

Hai Guys!
I was at Denmark for two weeks and took some photos. C&C, advice and stupid questions appreciated

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biff 07/06/14(Sun)12:51 UTC+1 No.2356935 Report



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biff 07/06/14(Sun)12:52 UTC+1 No.2356937 Report



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biff 07/06/14(Sun)12:58 UTC+1 No.2356948 Report

Time Stack ~100 Exposures

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biff 07/06/14(Sun)12:59 UTC+1 No.2356950 Report

Time Stack Nr. 2, also ~100 Exposures

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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)13:02 UTC+1 No.2356955 Report

>>2356948
Really like your moving clouds manipulations.
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biff 07/06/14(Sun)13:02 UTC+1 No.2356956 Report



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biff 07/06/14(Sun)13:05 UTC+1 No.2356959 Report

aaaand thats it, last picture

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LaiN 07/06/14(Sun)14:01 UTC+1 No.2356991 Report

>>2356943
>you will never be this chilled

nice pics biff
>>2356959
that one is shit through
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:12 UTC+1 No.2356997 Report

>>2356928
I'm not sure what /p/ thinks about heavy vignettes but it works in this image. if done in post tone it down a bit in the top left corner.

The waves move to the beach
The shoreline, the clouds and the birds push your eye to the vocal point, in this case the sun, you don't want to make that darker.


>>2356923
>>2356930
>>2356941
>>2356956
>>2356959
>>all the other images

When you're going to take a picture think:
What am I taking a picture of?

find something interesting

In landscape, try to give the image a sense of space, divide the image with a strong foreground, middle and background.

for example
this >>2356925
is a picture of nothing

You didn't go to Denmark to take pictures of grass did you? I imagine you liked the rainbow, but there's only a small bit of it in the picture and it's on the rainbow.

So what am I supposed to look at here?
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:18 UTC+1 No.2357000 Report

>>2356997
>for example
>this >>2356925
>is a picture of nothing

U wot m8?

Clearly the subject is the rainbow.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:40 UTC+1 No.2357008 Report

>>2357000
>Clearly the subject is the rainbow.
Sure, but don't tell me it isn't in the background.

The highest contrast is between the grass and the lighter tones of the sky and sand.
The bit of grass is what pops up from the image.

It's a picture of grass. You can see that, can't you?
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:49 UTC+1 No.2357011 Report

>>2356941
Is that a really tiny man halfway that road?
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:51 UTC+1 No.2357012 Report

>>2357011
Yup, and two more at the end.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)14:52 UTC+1 No.2357013 Report

>>2357008

You're talking out of your ass for the sake of criticizing. These are pretty competent pictures with little mis-steps in editing.

>>2356930
clearly has the house as the subject, and it looks animated because it's peeking up from behind the grass, the clouds and sky give it good contrast

>>2356947
would be great if it didn't have the vignette

>>2356956
ditto for the vignette on this one, pointless

Basically if OP ditches the vignette he'll go from 6/10 pictures to 7 or even 8 on some.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)15:05 UTC+1 No.2357024 Report

>>2357012
lel
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)20:29 UTC+1 No.2357149 Report

>>2357008
dude just shut up and appreciate these images, OP did good
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)20:32 UTC+1 No.2357152 Report

I grew up on Langeland and am there right now.
Nice photos.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)20:34 UTC+1 No.2357155 Report

>>2357008
Yeah it's in the "background" because it's a fucking rainbow. It's sunlight reflecting off of water droplets in the distant atmosphere.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)21:23 UTC+1 No.2357187 Report

>>2357155
>>2357149
The fuck? Dude gave some honest critique. It's actually pretty hard to take a picture of a rainbow with the rainbow as the subject. It's pretty damn easy to use a rainbow as an element, but not so much as the subject. The composition that the OP posted is one in which the rainbow is an element. There's nothing really drawing you to the rainbow. The level of the horizon and the focus take your eyes to the grass.

No wonder /p/ doesn't get shit for critique these days.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)23:37 UTC+1 No.2357249 Report

>>2356948
This is a really rad concept and execution
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)23:43 UTC+1 No.2357253 Report

>>2357187
Actually I agree that the grass dominates the frame.

It's still a photo that I enjoyed looking at, and the reason anon got such a response to his "criticism" is because he said it's "a photo of nothing", which is bullshit.

>but it's just a photo of grass!!!

Yeah, I could look at any image and say "it's just a photo of (whatever is in the frame)", that's not really constructive in any way. It's just an observation made for the sake of dismissing the image, and doesn't really impart any meaningful information besides "I don't really like it".
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)23:48 UTC+1 No.2357256 Report

>>2357253
>Yeah, I could look at any image and say "it's just a photo of (whatever is in the frame)", that's not really constructive in any way. It's just an observation made for the sake of dismissing the image, and doesn't really impart any meaningful information besides "I don't really like it".
It is a little more meaningful than you think it is. Yes, obviously it's not of literal nothingness, but that criticism means that there is no real subject that both stands out and is worth of interest. It comes down to composition and how the composition failed to express what the photographer was obviously trying to do.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)23:51 UTC+1 No.2357260 Report

>>2357256
>but that criticism means that there is no real subject that both stands out and is worth of interest.

Not worth of interest to you,perhaps, but that doesn't mean other people don't enjoy looking at it.

Is it a wonderfully amazing and timeless photograph? Perhaps not, but it's nice to look at, and fits in well the set of images posted here. I don't really think it needs to do anything besides that.
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Anonymous 07/06/14(Sun)23:57 UTC+1 No.2357266 Report

>>2357260
>Not worth of interest to you,perhaps, but that doesn't mean other people don't enjoy looking at it.
I guess I walked right into that. I was using the word "interest" in a more jargon-like sense, i.e. there is nothing of photographic interest in that image.
>Is it a wonderfully amazing and timeless photograph? Perhaps not, but it's nice to look at, and fits in well the set of images posted here. I don't really think it needs to do anything besides that.
Yeah, it is nice to look at, and yeah, it doesn't *have* to be anything more than that, but you don't post asking for C&C if you're happy with just something nice to look at. You're looking to grow in both skills and aesthetic sense--a goal that is not served in any way with just letting an image that is otherwise bereft of any quality other than "nice to look at" get away with being subpar just because it's nice to look at.

If OP wanted the wankeristic circlejerk of congratulations at having hit his shutter release, he could easily post to tumblr, instagram, 500px, or any of a host of other places where pretty is good enough.
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Anonymous 07/07/14(Mon)00:04 UTC+1 No.2357269 Report

>>2357266
Fair enough.
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Anonymous 07/07/14(Mon)00:07 UTC+1 No.2357270 Report

>>2356948
bif u peace of shit
what r u doing
bif u motherfucker
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biff 07/07/14(Mon)18:13 UTC+1 No.2357669 Report

>>2356955
>>2356991
>>2357249

Thanks!

>>2357011
No, its a woman actually
>>2357013
You're right, I use vignetting way to often and too hard. Really don't know why, but I enjoy the effect somehow. Will turn it down a bit in the future....maybe...
>>2357152
It's a really beautiful island, hope I get there again sometime
>>2357266
I see your point and in the terms of 'photographic interest' you're right. But I'm content with the picture and how it turned out, though.
But I apprechiate your critique, that's exactly why I post here on /p/
>>2357270
just had to do it fgt
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Anonymous 07/07/14(Mon)18:45 UTC+1 No.2357694 Report

>>2356941
>>2356947
I like these two, but really tone down/fix the vignetting. A few ok ones in the mix as well. Your processing overall seems lacking too, dull colors on most of them and the resampling seems to be fucked or you just applied way too much post sharpening.
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Anonymous 07/07/14(Mon)20:08 UTC+1 No.2357758 Report

>>2356928
>>2356930
>>2356947
>>2356923
these are lovely. you got me all hyped, I'm visiting Denmark in September, can't wait
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